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i agree with emotion less - this was a string of words that conveyed a meaning, though.... i didn't like the ending. i know you did it to tie it ...

i liked this. it was a collection of rather disconnected or half finished phrases that all came together with that wonderful ending. my only complaint is that the phrases in ...

i loved your rhyming. very Edgar Allen Poe like rhythm and rhyme style. it's very catchy, and i found that i was muttered the poem to myself aloud. at the ...

I'm aware that your life lines are leaving your body and I'm aware that your twilight's in sight I know the priest cuts you all too shrewdly But I'll stand ...

good poem. rhythmic.

short and beautiful. His hand in mine we sit it should be "His hand in mine, we sit." this boy "this boy"? it sounds...i don't know, but it came off ...

it's aggresive and bears a ranting style, and i happen to like it. i've taken a while pondering over this, as the first time i read it i was far ...

this is good. it was a bit bland of poetic language, excluding the first paragraph, but i overall liked it. personally, due to the situation, i think the guy got ...

okay, offer more false solutions to the metaphor besides the cupid thing. it seemed too...ehh...like an essay with only two paragraphs or something. i liked the fact you said "no"... ...

Makes my feel like I got a new toy i'm seeing chewed doy toys covered in salvia and teeth marks. i'm not liking it.

if you continue to write a lot, i believe you can perfect some of your flaws. for one - you were very informal in this poem, and it sort of ...

Cheers to all those girls alone on Valentine’s Day The wine sloshes within Crystal-clear glasses – The final electric ray of light Stabbing through the red prism design The chocolates ...

wow. well, as for fun, i enjoyed this. i'm not a whore! =[ i just want chocolate.

hahah. :lol: wow, i'd shove it up his...oh, yes *****, too. you know, you could've used the word and just rated this - it would be easier to understand, at ...

kill the last two lines...rewrite them. Someone took this on, they were very tough The person almost won that class they yearn both of these lines have such forced rhymes ...